Okay - last post has generated some great ideas and instead of whinging at Nummy Treat or trying to take back the treat, I am beginning to think y'all are right and giving up and starting anew might be the thing to do.
And while I talk and talk and talk about why critical review is important and it is important to work on your craft and no one improves in a vacuum... it is time to stop telling why and showing...
Here is my first vid. It is Spike and his women (and Angel) and it is to Gordon Lightfoot and it is unbelievably bad - and there is a Riley/Buffy sub-plot. See, I thought, like TV shows, a video should have a A story and also a B story.
This, is what feedback and hard work has done for me. Thank you.
Right Click to Save as (WMV)
http://www.headtilt.com/VideoThatSucks.WMV