Date: 2005-03-10 08:13 pm (UTC)
It doesn't flow with the rest of the line. It sticks out like a very cute sore thumb. You should probably either find yet another "vulnerable" or lose the beloved "luscious" clip. Although, now that I think about it, is anything *not* going to stick out like a sore thumb on "luscious" unless it's from the same scene as "cool, tall, vulnerable"? Something to ponder.

Of course, I'm also fine with leaving it the way it is and grading it on a curve because Chloe is adorable and the purpose of this vid is not to flip out and kill somebody.
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