Okay - the first "I wanna be cool, tall, vulnerable and luscious" - I moved around cool and tall and matched up vulnerable to that so now "luscious" sticks out like a sore thumb but I LOVE THAT CLIP! She is bouncing in her seat and naming off whatever on her hand and is just so *into* what she is doing that it fits for me. I don't think it flows with the rest of that line, though.
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2005-03-10 07:36 pm (UTC)