Personally, I'm dying to see the finished version!
Okay - see you really should not have said that because renenet and I were just discussing the other day how we both feel we are no longer objective about this vid.
We agreed on a few key changes, however (especially going back to the long shot of the syringe in the leg - I broke it up trying to follow the music more and it... it loses impact and I think the *reason* it loses impact is precisely because it is not what you would expect listening to the music and that tells the audience to pay specific attention to Bobby. If you break it up, the focus on Bobby has shifted and it is more on the syringe and then the flinch he gives is easy to miss. This is a working theory - I can show you both versions), and I plan on making those tonight and Lum helped me identify some problems with the blurring at the end, so I'll fix that and add the finished titles (Eunice rocks!)
Soooo - since I *have* to upload this thing this weekend and you *said* you wanted to see it -- wanna give the olll once over tonight/tomorrow?
We discussed that I could post to my LJ the need for fresh eyes/beta, but then decided against that cause it would just be... well, I don't need feedback at this point - I need beta and that is a fine line and something I just do not trust with many people.
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Date: 2005-01-28 03:57 pm (UTC)Okay - see you really should not have said that because renenet and I were just discussing the other day how we both feel we are no longer objective about this vid.
We agreed on a few key changes, however (especially going back to the long shot of the syringe in the leg - I broke it up trying to follow the music more and it... it loses impact and I think the *reason* it loses impact is precisely because it is not what you would expect listening to the music and that tells the audience to pay specific attention to Bobby. If you break it up, the focus on Bobby has shifted and it is more on the syringe and then the flinch he gives is easy to miss. This is a working theory - I can show you both versions), and I plan on making those tonight and Lum helped me identify some problems with the blurring at the end, so I'll fix that and add the finished titles (Eunice rocks!)
Soooo - since I *have* to upload this thing this weekend and you *said* you wanted to see it -- wanna give the olll once over tonight/tomorrow?
We discussed that I could post to my LJ the need for fresh eyes/beta, but then decided against that cause it would just be... well, I don't need feedback at this point - I need beta and that is a fine line and something I just do not trust with many people.