Whoa!
Other people already mentioned the zooms and the fluid movement and I second that. I also appreciate that you didn't go literal, and good vidding rarely does. The song choice did bring to mind Firefly, at first, but the more I watch, the more I think it fits the character. Plus, it's Starbuck is all but conventional, so why should she have typical music.

And thank you for sharing your vid outline, I love to read this behind-the-scenes stuff.